Confusion

I’m only here because of you. You made me real! I’m true. Because of you. You give me life You keep me going With every thought you keep me flowing I greet you, Every night. I speak to you Everyday. No, I’ll never leave Because you tell me what to say.

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Eric Ashford

Date: 10/2/2019 9:45:00 AM

Hi Alan, well it does seem that a femme has got you by the balls. Good to find a good women, not so good to always dance to her tune. This however is a strong poem, and captures the mood you wanted to convey. Well done.

Alan Nesbitt
Date: 10/4/2019 2:04:00 PM

thanks eric. its not about a woman

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/2/2019 6:05:00 AM

confusion! absent of knowledge!

Alan Nesbitt
Date: 10/4/2019 2:05:00 PM

almost. absent and present with false knowledge would be closer

Yasmin Ilahi

Date: 10/1/2019 1:53:00 PM

GREAT POEM. IS IT ABOUT A LOVED ONE OR A GREATER BEING?