Alan Nesbitt Poet Free verse

Confusion

I’m only here because of you.
You made me real!
I’m true.
Because of you.
You give me life
You keep me going
With every thought you keep me flowing
I greet you,
Every night.
I speak to you
Everyday.
No, I’ll never leave
Because you tell me what to say.

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Eric Ashford October 2, 2019 at 9:45 AM Hi Alan, well it does seem that a femme has got you by the balls. Good to find a good women, not so good to always dance to her tune. This however is a strong poem, and captures the mood you wanted to convey. Well done. Alan Nesbitt October 4, 2019 at 2:04 PM thanks eric. its not about a woman

Mahtab Bangalee October 2, 2019 at 6:05 AM confusion! absent of knowledge! Alan Nesbitt October 4, 2019 at 2:05 PM almost. absent and present with false knowledge would be closer

Yasmin Ilahi October 1, 2019 at 1:53 PM GREAT POEM. IS IT ABOUT A LOVED ONE OR A GREATER BEING?