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Confused Understanding

Hmm this thing is very confusing But at the same time it is amusing This thing here I can't comprehend Will this nerve racking thing ever end?!! Oh! Now I understand it all It is nothing but a cold, brick wall I don't understand why I thought it was hard It's just as dumb as a bucket of lard! Hey what's this thing in front of me? Is it a bird, a plane, a bee?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/14/2009 11:54:00 AM
sweet
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:21:00 PM
great job savannah. keep up the good work!
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Date: 3/25/2009 12:01:00 PM
I'm still confused, nice write...Raul
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Date: 3/25/2009 11:59:00 AM
Funny rhymes, good pacing for a couplet. I enjoy the universal aspects of this one. Great job, Savannah! Warm regards, John.
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