Savannah Rose Harper Poet Couplet

Confused Understanding

Hmm this thing is very confusing 
But at the same time it is amusing

This thing here I can't comprehend
Will this nerve racking thing ever end?!!

Oh! Now I understand it all
It is nothing but a cold, brick wall

I don't understand why I thought it was hard
It's just as dumb as a bucket of lard!

Hey what's this thing in front of me?
Is it a bird, a plane, a bee?

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Chris Yarnell April 14, 2009 at 11:54 AM sweet

Abe Lopez March 25, 2009 at 8:21 PM great job savannah. keep up the good work!

Raul Moreno March 25, 2009 at 12:01 PM I'm still confused, nice write...Raul

John Weber March 25, 2009 at 11:59 AM Funny rhymes, good pacing for a couplet. I enjoy the universal aspects of this one. Great job, Savannah! Warm regards, John.