Confused Love Confuses

UNSUPPORTED CODE We...
    Love the concept of being original,   
 UNSUPPORTED CODE Always... UNSUPPORTED CODE 
    Concept the original, being of love,
 UNSUPPORTED CODE And... UNSUPPORTED CODE 
    Of the original being, concept love!
 UNSUPPORTED CODE Will... UNSUPPORTED CODE 
    The original being of love concept?
 UNSUPPORTED CODE Be... UNSUPPORTED CODE 
    Original, love the concept of being.
Love... UNSUPPORTED CODE 
    Being the original concept of love....
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June 22, 2016 at 11:27 PM
nice to see again...skat
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December 26, 2013 at 12:04 AM
Hi Garett, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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December 13, 2013 at 4:17 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Garett. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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December 13, 2013 at 3:21 AM
interesting and welcome
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