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Confused

Love, miss you when gone Together we're most apart Heart's beat is silence

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James Fraser

Date: 3/23/2015 3:59:00 PM

Indeed a heart's beat may remain silence when one goes. Fine Haiku Patricia :) :)

Brian Pierre-Alexander

Date: 9/27/2014 8:10:00 AM

Excellent

Patricia Moran
Date: 9/27/2014 8:12:00 AM

Thank you :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/26/2014 11:33:00 PM

Great Haiku!!!!

Patricia Moran
Date: 9/26/2014 11:47:00 PM

Thank you so much for commenting and I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2014 10:12:00 PM

thank you for the nice reply

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/20/2014 1:26:00 PM

Hi Patricia, this is such a wonderful haiku! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita

Patricia Moran
Date: 9/20/2014 2:36:00 PM

Thank you so much XD I'm so happy so you liked it and thank you for the wonderful welcome :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/19/2014 2:49:00 PM

Beautiful poem enjoyed. Welcome to the Poetrysoup. Loved always,bl

Patricia Moran
Date: 9/19/2014 2:51:00 PM

Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/19/2014 2:27:00 PM

Great write. Thank you for a fine read.

Patricia Moran
Date: 9/19/2014 2:29:00 PM

I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 9/19/2014 1:52:00 PM

Loving this Haiku of yours...please post more. Let me know when you do. INK-U-SCRIPT

Patricia Moran
Date: 9/19/2014 1:56:00 PM

Will do and thank you for commenting :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/18/2014 2:54:00 PM

This is a beautiful haiku Patricia:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Patricia Moran
Date: 9/18/2014 4:36:00 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/18/2014 1:08:00 PM

welcome aboard, patricia... you start your page with an affectionate 'ku so well rendered... all the best and looking forward for more... huggs

Patricia Moran
Date: 9/18/2014 4:37:00 PM

Thank you for the merry welcome

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2014 4:17:00 AM

Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Patricia - I choose your first great haiku - I like it - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Patricia Moran
Date: 9/18/2014 4:38:00 PM

Thank you for the merry welcome

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2014 10:13:00 AM

Nice thought well expressed on confusion in life, Patricia

Patricia Moran
Date: 9/18/2014 4:39:00 PM

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/16/2014 5:55:00 PM

Patricia,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Patricia Moran
Date: 9/18/2014 4:38:00 PM

Thank you for the merry welcome