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Confused

Love, miss you when gone
Together we're most apart
Heart's beat is silence

absenceconfusionfuturehow ihaiku

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James Fraser

March 23, 2015 at 3:59 PM

Indeed a heart's beat may remain silence when one goes. Fine Haiku Patricia :) :)

Brian Pierre-Alexander

September 27, 2014 at 8:10 AM

Excellent

Patricia Moran

September 27, 2014 at 8:12 AM

Thank you :)

Arthur Vaso

September 26, 2014 at 11:33 PM

Great Haiku!!!!

Patricia Moran

September 26, 2014 at 11:47 PM

Thank you so much for commenting and I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

Poet Destroyer A

September 23, 2014 at 10:12 PM

thank you for the nice reply

Pandita Sietesantos

September 20, 2014 at 1:26 PM

Hi Patricia, this is such a wonderful haiku! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita

Patricia Moran

September 20, 2014 at 2:36 PM

Thank you so much XD I'm so happy so you liked it and thank you for the wonderful welcome :)

Bl Devnath

September 19, 2014 at 2:49 PM

Beautiful poem enjoyed. Welcome to the Poetrysoup. Loved always,bl

Patricia Moran

September 19, 2014 at 2:51 PM

Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Maurice Yvonne

September 19, 2014 at 2:27 PM

Great write. Thank you for a fine read.

Patricia Moran

September 19, 2014 at 2:29 PM

I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

September 19, 2014 at 1:52 PM

Loving this Haiku of yours...please post more. Let me know when you do. INK-U-SCRIPT

Patricia Moran

September 19, 2014 at 1:56 PM

Will do and thank you for commenting :)

Jan Allison

September 18, 2014 at 2:54 PM

This is a beautiful haiku Patricia:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Patricia Moran

September 18, 2014 at 4:36 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Nette Onclaud

September 18, 2014 at 1:08 PM

welcome aboard, patricia... you start your page with an affectionate 'ku so well rendered... all the best and looking forward for more... huggs

Patricia Moran

September 18, 2014 at 4:37 PM

Thank you for the merry welcome

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 18, 2014 at 4:17 AM

Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Patricia - I choose your first great haiku - I like it - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Patricia Moran

September 18, 2014 at 4:38 PM

Thank you for the merry welcome

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 17, 2014 at 10:13 AM

Nice thought well expressed on confusion in life, Patricia

Patricia Moran

September 18, 2014 at 4:39 PM

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Poet Destroyer A

September 16, 2014 at 5:55 PM

Patricia,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Patricia Moran

September 18, 2014 at 4:38 PM

Thank you for the merry welcome

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