Confrontation

A murderer was asked
by a father,
"When you killed my boy,
did you send him 
to heaven or hell?"
And the murderer replied,
"While he lived,
did you send him
to heaven or to hell?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Collins Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 11:34 AM
This is startling. and wise, yet a little tough on the father of a murdered son.
Peterson Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 8:46 PM
None is guiltless, and we participate directly in the joys and sorrows of others. One can kill without death, all at once or a little at a time. This poem caused me considerable reflection. Thanks.
Horne Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 2:49 PM
thought-provoking piece indeed
Adams Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 8:49 AM
this is a good write, it makes the reader ponder so many thoughts from different angles... id the father raised him right and he followed a good path, he went to heaven...on the flip side, the pain of murder had to be Hell...powerful questions linger on...well done
Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 7:03 AM
The answer is neither of them sent him to heaven or hell for he had to chose which way he would go...I hope that he chose Jesus for He is the way, the truth and the life..Enjoyed reading your question..Of course, the parents influence the child but the ultimate choice is each individual's responsibility..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Harrell Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 1:33 AM
Yes, we should all make everyone's life here on earth a heaven. We shouldn't be the cause of someone's stumble. I like it, The Situation :)
Harrell Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 2:00 AM
The Situation, I don't think you mean it. Good night.
Situation Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 1:52 AM
we should all make everyone's life here on earth a TRIP to heaven.
Situation Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 1:23 AM
think about it.
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