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Confrontation

hungry lions watch
elephants with calves pass by ~
bulls charge at the pride


Written 19th March 2021  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 4:45 AM
When the lion confronts the elephants, the bulls chase and confront the pride.... the mightier attack the weaker. The jungle law is well illustrated!
Cunningham Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 11:20 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I love to see the lions denied a meal, but then I suppose they have to eat too. Tom
Wolf Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 9:08 PM
You've given the lie to the "Joy of Nature" crowd. Well-penned, my friend. :) gw
Cunningham Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 1:21 AM
Thank you very much Gershon, glad you enjoyed it. Tom
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March 27, 2021 at 6:02 AM
At Kruger Park on one of our trips a horrible stench reached our camp - we were told there was a dead Elephant Bull laying dead there for three days, - but the Park is not permitted to move the body, why, because it is food for the rest of the wild animals . We immediately drove, following our nose! When we arrived we could not get near, cars were parked along the road and in front of the unfortunate animal and a huge pride of lions were feasting on it. love your write! Blessings Jennifer
Cunningham Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, the kruger is on my bucket list. Animals have to eat and only kill to survive unlike man. Hope you're well and your weekend is going well. Tom
Ball Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Lovely one Tom. And love the picture. You can see the lions wondering "if I do I get a whippin'. Great one. Love it. God Bless, JB
Cunningham Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Thank you very much Judy, love it when animals protect their young. Tom
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March 23, 2021 at 12:29 PM
A splendid Haiku Tom, it’s amazing how animals, same as humans, instinctively protect their young... Belle
Cunningham Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Thank you very much Belle, it sure is I know lions have to eat but I love it when they lose. Tom
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March 22, 2021 at 12:44 PM
The photo struck fear in me; what brave bulls!
Cunningham Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:47 PM
Thank you Caren, elephants become fearless when their calves are under threat. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 8:31 AM
Good one. It is amazing how so much like human families are these magnificent animals. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Thank you very much Sara, im pleased you liked it. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 8:37 PM
Action packed!
Cunningham Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 2:20 AM
Thank you very much Kim, enjoy your Sunday. Tom
Logan Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 12:03 PM
How brave they are to protect the herd. I've always been fascinated with elephants. A great Haiku, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 12:13 PM
Thank you very much Jenna, they're a close knit bunch, saw them in Kenya in the wild a few years ago, it was amazing. Tom
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March 20, 2021 at 6:09 AM
lovely, Tom ~
Cunningham Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Thank you Line, I love it when the lions miss out. Tom
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March 19, 2021 at 2:56 PM
Wow, those elephants are bold! A very interesting and compelling haiku, Tom. If for the contest, winning wishes for you. Hope you are enjoying some nice spring weather now. Hugs, Carolyn
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Thank you very much Carolyn, it was but re read the rules so have withdrawn it. Still quite chilly here but heading the right way. Enjoy your weekend Tom
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March 19, 2021 at 12:58 PM
Magnificent! Blessings my friend, Tom! take care!
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 12:59 PM
Thank you very much Demetrios, im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Summers Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Excellent haiku and picture. I liked the title also. Good luck in the contest. John
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 10:45 AM
Thank you very much John, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Sands Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Well written Tom. I agree the title and photo go perfectly with your words :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Romios Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 9:03 AM
The Title perfectly matches this well versed haiku!! Pangie
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 9:39 AM
Thank you very much Pangie, im happy that you liked it. Hope your day is going well. Tom
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March 19, 2021 at 8:07 AM
Hi Tom, Your photo works well with your poem. Those lions sure look hungry. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 9:39 AM
Thank you very much Alexis, when they're hungry there's no stopping them. Tom
Poetry Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 7:00 AM
so is life in natural habitats, each with its instinct and manners ... beautiful picture painted dear Tom salute alkas
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Thank you very much Alkas, im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
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March 19, 2021 at 6:58 AM
Survival of the fittest. Someone is getting a meal.
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 7:02 AM
So true Victor, the lions never go without. Tom
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March 19, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Wonderfully done. My husband loves watching the animal shows, though we live in a more domesticated area so we have to see them on tv. Love this, God bless you always, Love, Gina
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 5:31 AM
Thank you very much Regina, I too love the wildlife programmes and love it when the lions lose. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Survival game. Confrontation well illustrated Tom. All the best.
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 5:28 AM
Thank you very much Vijay, when those bulls charge they're unstoppable. Tom
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March 19, 2021 at 3:59 AM
- They look really hungry ... great written, Tom :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a nice day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 4:04 AM
Thank you very much Anne, I know they have to eat but I love it when they lose. Tom
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