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Conflicting Desires:

Arising in me are the voices of two different worlds. One calls for closeness_____ with its rise of passion and gentle decline. The other calls for distance without voices clamoring for attention. Ears that are yet weary of human sounds and physical closeness. Distancing from vespers, It calls up pain________ not understanding____to weary to ask. Just needing space to heal, Space that honors what is!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/24/2008 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Keith for your comment but the dynamic of the poem is more profound than an earthly relationship.
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Date: 11/24/2008 8:32:00 AM
An age old dilemma captured brilliantly! Women... ya can't live with 'em and you can't kill 'em! Sometimes peace and quiet is the best remedy. Well done my friend!! Best wishes, Keith
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