Confessions of An Uncircumcised Man

Confusing confusion has got 
me confused
Confused about where I 
wanna be- be-
 becoz I lie next to a being 
who insists I  disrespect her by 
not taking my " mortal hat" off  

Iam no mouse or human 
ratatoille
But   I have
Cooked and baked my own 
misfortunes
You see I have grown to knw 
the dominating male  fashion
No gentlemen- 
Not your chinos or your vans
Um talking about that deep 
lonely fashion
That horny everyday but can't 
get none from my woman 
typa fashion
That-  cold shower everyday  
typa fashion
That fashion that leaves a 
brother angry as hell- I guess 
they were right
"A hungry man is an angry 
man" 

Iam angry at my ignorant 
ignorance
becoz for sum reason I fear 
the thot of having a piece of 
me - in pieces 
For some reason though iam 
not religious I dare to  quote 
the bible  " what  God has 
joined together,let no man put 
asunder- nd that is my 
ultimate defence for this fence 
I have placed around my loins! 
But u see  the one I love has 
no tym for this nonsense..
she refuses to lie with me as 
does a man and his wife - 
All becoz I refuse to get under 
the knife!
Saying "babe um not about 
that life"
Surely my pride should  be 
circumcised
As will my *****
AfterAll circumcision is the 
mission!!! 

 And This has been THE 
CONFESSIONS OF AN 
UNCIRCUMCISED MAN!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/30/2013 5:42:00 PM
The poem is realistic, I like the selected style of it. Great work hey. You might as well wanna check out mine.
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Date: 9/30/2013 10:33:00 AM
I like your frankness, your wit in articulating everyday life- your verve in taking moral issues head-on without warning, without apologising, without wanting to get praise for it... This is Susan I've come to know. You're a great poet my Sis. Keep it up. I enjoy your work!JM
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Date: 9/30/2013 10:40:00 AM
Thank you very much .. I do try
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