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Confessions of An Uncircumcised Man

Confusing confusion has got me confused Confused about where I wanna be- be- becoz I lie next to a being who insists I disrespect her by not taking my " mortal hat" off Iam no mouse or human ratatoille But I have Cooked and baked my own misfortunes You see I have grown to knw the dominating male fashion No gentlemen- Not your chinos or your vans Um talking about that deep lonely fashion That horny everyday but can't get none from my woman typa fashion That- cold shower everyday typa fashion That fashion that leaves a brother angry as hell- I guess they were right "A hungry man is an angry man" Iam angry at my ignorant ignorance becoz for sum reason I fear the thot of having a piece of me - in pieces For some reason though iam not religious I dare to quote the bible " what God has joined together,let no man put asunder- nd that is my ultimate defence for this fence I have placed around my loins! But u see the one I love has no tym for this nonsense.. she refuses to lie with me as does a man and his wife - All becoz I refuse to get under the knife! Saying "babe um not about that life" Surely my pride should be circumcised As will my ***** AfterAll circumcision is the mission!!! And This has been THE CONFESSIONS OF AN UNCIRCUMCISED MAN!

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Date: 10/30/2013 5:42:00 PM
The poem is realistic, I like the selected style of it. Great work hey. You might as well wanna check out mine.
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Date: 9/30/2013 10:33:00 AM
I like your frankness, your wit in articulating everyday life- your verve in taking moral issues head-on without warning, without apologising, without wanting to get praise for it... This is Susan I've come to know. You're a great poet my Sis. Keep it up. I enjoy your work!JM
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Susan Benjamin
Date: 9/30/2013 10:40:00 AM
Thank you very much .. I do try

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