Confessions of a Drunk

Buys  another drink;
Always drinks his whisky neat.
Loosens up his tongue, 
Tells the barman, ‘Hey buddy,
‘I’m the ‘girl’ you kissed last night.’


For Natalie's Confessions to a Bartender contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 9:39 PM
haha what a revelation .. great entry Jack.. and a great confession .. oh good luck luv..
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2011 at 9:56 PM
hahahaha. Another goodie!!
Sivey Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 3:56 PM
Woe, ha, that barman would be a little ticked off I would assume! Very funny Jack!!
Wesley Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 1:29 PM
He forgets she's a he - am I right? Funny twist to the problem Jack. LOL :)
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