Confessions of a Bobblehead

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All things can tempt me~ I'm a scatter brain Trying to focus causes a degree of pain Distracted by a yummy treat or herbal tea The slightest sounds arouse and sidetrack me It's all too easy to sway my concentration Toying with convoluted laws of attraction My attention spins often on a dime It doesn't take much for me to waste my time That's why I prefer to ignore the phone And keep working on building me a clone AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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John Watt

Date: 3/18/2020 11:08:00 PM

Oh, I just love your final line, I didn't see that coming at all... enjoyed this read and can relate to so many of your distractions. Congrats, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/19/2020 9:04:00 AM

Thanks, John. Much appreciated.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/18/2020 10:50:00 PM

Line, let me know when your clone will be mass produced! Congratulations on these lines of whimsy!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/19/2020 9:04:00 AM

No problem, Sam. Thanks.

Jean Bush

Date: 2/23/2020 11:57:00 AM

Hahahaha! The last line is perfect. Well done. I think we're all scatter brains at times. Clones would be great but they'd all have to have their own computers.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/23/2020 12:05:00 PM

Absolutely, no sharing. LOL Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jean.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/22/2020 10:27:00 PM

After you finish your clone, I would like one too. I have eighteen dollars and seventeen cents toward it already.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/23/2020 3:08:00 AM

OK Caren, I've got you on the waiting list.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/20/2020 6:31:00 PM

You made me smile Line and you would make a million if you can build clones - or could you just create another pair of hands - that would suit me some days lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2020 10:00:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jan. Most appreciated.