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Confession

I admit I approximated akin adultery Abusively allowing my abominable,abstinent eyes To absorb abstract,alluring beauty around me Gazed galvanic glances guiltily Thus glamorized God's grave gluttony. Abdelwaheb Dhaou.

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Date: 3/18/2015 1:07:00 PM
Nice poem on confession nicely worded my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 2/7/2015 12:20:00 PM
brilliant alliteration - a confession many of us can plead guilty to:-) Hugs jan xx
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Abdelwaheb dhaou
Date: 2/8/2015 12:39:00 PM
Thanks Jane Allison though I made a mistake keeping the vowels which should not be present in the alliteration I later made my mind to keep it as It seemed to be acceptable as you proved it here. Thank you for your uplifting comments dear !