Abdelwaheb Dhaou Poet Alliteration

Confession

I admit I approximated akin adultery
Abusively allowing my abominable,abstinent eyes
To absorb abstract,alluring beauty around me
Gazed galvanic glances guiltily
Thus glamorized God's grave gluttony.

    Abdelwaheb Dhaou.

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Bl Devnath March 18, 2015 at 1:07 PM Nice poem on confession nicely worded my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison February 7, 2015 at 12:20 PM brilliant alliteration - a confession many of us can plead guilty to:-) Hugs jan xx Abdelwaheb Dhaou February 8, 2015 at 12:39 PM Thanks Jane Allison though I made a mistake keeping the vowels which should not be present in the alliteration I later made my mind to keep it as It seemed to be acceptable as you proved it here. Thank you for your uplifting comments dear !