Confession

I SAW YOU SLEEPING THE OTHER DAY,
WITH SO MUCH PEACE ON YOUR FACE.
I WISHED IT WOULD LAST FOR LONG,
BUT THAT VERY MOMENT YOUR PHONE 
RANG SOUNDING LIKE TIRING-TIRING.

I SAW YOU SMILING THE OTHER DAY,
WITH A SPECIAL GLOW ON YOUR FACE.
AND PRAYED TO GOD IN TOTAL AWE,
THAT THE SMILE ON YOUR FACE WOULD LAST FOR LONG.

I SAW YOU TENSED THE OTHER DAY,
AND PRAYED MY TEARS WOULD DRY.
BUT KNEW YOU WERE DOING ALL THIS FOR ME,
SO, JUST THOUGHT ABOUT THAT AND SMILED.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/27/2013 12:54:00 PM
awee. Mahima, this is a very pleasing poem. A sweet smile, and a very warm caring end. I noticed you have a tiny bit of what I would call alliteration. Maybe one day we can do a Collaboration together. I would love it... xox... LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2013 1:15:00 PM
I had a very charming Christmas, .. However it is cold, and I miss the SUN.. I posted a Haiku, on Sun Dancing... heheh. Enjoy it when you have the time. I' am looking forward this coming year, in reading more from you. xox..Linda
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Date: 12/27/2013 1:09:00 PM
oh god! thank you sooooooo much it will be an honor to collaborate with you by the way how did your Christmas go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12/19/2013 11:23:00 AM
so sweet emotions
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Date: 12/27/2013 1:10:00 PM
thank you so much for reading my poem
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