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Bright blue sky with glowing white clouds theatrics of the heavens please heart and mind into solace. Entrances spirit to fly away and leave this earthly home to realms unknown. Rescuer of the vagabond the empty stomach has found a friend among the drifter's roads. Rainbow bright amid the rain colorful with promises confection of creation!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/28/2011 10:47:00 AM
Creative work that I am reading this morn..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 7/27/2011 8:03:00 AM
So creative your poem, Doris! Enjoyed the read of every single line. Have a great week!
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Date: 7/26/2011 9:35:00 PM
Lovely visions to carry the soul away. Your verse has much to enjoy dear Doris.
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Date: 7/26/2011 11:20:00 AM
I used to have these visions Doris, up in the Cumberland Hills of Tenn. What sights ! I did fly away, to there, I'm from Pa.....*smiles* Awesome write dear poet ! Have a blessed week....much love, james
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Date: 7/26/2011 10:38:00 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Doris. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your outstanding work. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2011 10:35:00 AM
wow what a dynamic poem Doris.. such brilliant lines luv.. theatrics of the heavens please.. oh a great one.. and rescuer of the vagabond.. another great one.. mesmerizing my friend.. good luck if for any contest..
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Date: 7/26/2011 10:26:00 AM
nature is one fresh confection, doris... love the way you used imagery to depict ypur subject in a most unique way! :)huggs, nette
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