Confectionates Hurt Teeth Here In My Mouth Twenty Below

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Anyway my teeth are bitter cold,aching so....<jelsr>

CONFECTIONATES Hurt Teeth Here In My Mouth Twenty Below My teeth are bitter cold Aching so much so Bit down on a red pop-cycle After inhaling mint malted butter brickle Nasal dip tried chocolate chip So cold outside can't feel my face What sense does it make It's below 28 degree Aching so much so It's cold outside why am I This doesn't make any sense Eating all these confectionates It's winter, snowing and twenty below zero Frostbit, frozen lips, hurt teeth here at twenty below 3/18/18 Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. ©2018

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