Condolences and Prayers

A long, long, long, long time ago

                                            I met a family

                               Grandparents, Aunts and Uncles

                                   And Kids, were dear to me

                                       Travels to the mesa

                                Where a precious Penny sweet

                           Had early left the gold drenched lands

                               To her family flown, would meet    

                             We'd set some flowers on the grass   

                                Where she rests now in sleep

                              Watered with loves tears that all  

                                Each tender heart would weep  

                          But trusting in a Father, Who would His

                                          Daughter keep

                           The years like tides rolled out to sea

                                  Earth moved along in flight

                                Continuous orbit round the Sun
  
                               Throughout life's day and night

                            And one by one, some called to rest

                              Completing toils and earthly test

                              Again the Tears on earthen grass     

                               Another dear has come to pass

                               My prayers, my heart, is lifted    

                                To the Great and Mighty King     

                                To where her family gathers     

                                On shores where choirs sing    

                                My heartfelt, deep condolence 

                                  And promise of my prayer

                          That Heavenly Father's Precious Peace

                                 Will comfort each with care

                               That hope, and joy, and healing      

                               Will be poured out on each one  

                                  Until the final words of joy

                                                  of 

                                "Welcome child.  Well done."

                            He gave us tears, tears to be cried

                           And promises, they'll each be dried

                                 Upon the joy and promises

                              On the precious homeward side
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Date: 5/27/2023 8:57:00 PM
Very moving, BJ! Tears flow from my pen, as well... Blessed be the Judge of Truth, and let us say, Amen. You've quite the touch on this one. :) Gershon
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 8/10/2023 8:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon, I'm sorry I'm responding to your sweet comment so late. I have been trying to catch up on here. I always appreciate you so much. This friend was such a sweetheart, though I haven't seen her in years, her loss affects so many who love her. Her family was so sweet, and I know there is a welcoming home party for those precious souls like her. <3
Date: 5/22/2023 10:31:00 PM
Beautiful BJ and well said. We are facing this right now in my family as my husband slowly withers. I haven't been online much for awhile because I am spending time trying to work at my job and take care of him too. My daughter is is big help but we are all pretty well exhausted. Well done my friend. God Bless, JB
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 5/23/2023 9:26:00 PM
Oh Judy, I'm so sorry to hear about your dear husband. I have thought of you and prayed for you. I knew you were struggling with a lot last you were on here. Life is precious, but often so sad. I will pray for you more. I'm glad you reached out, I want to know how you're doing, even if it's sad news. You are loved and appreciated here on the soup and have been much missed. Hugs to you precious friend <3
Date: 5/19/2023 8:34:00 AM
The curse of old age. Outliving all of your friends and relatives but with the hope of life everlasting through faith and prayer. Our turn is coming! have a great weekend,Betty jo:)
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 5/23/2023 9:37:00 PM
Yes, it's sad. I haven't seen this particular friend in a long time, but when she and her sister, my dear friend Linda have come to this neck of the woods, it was always wonderful to see her, and I'm so blessed to have been able to know her, and someday I believe we will meet again on the other side! I did have a good weekend, a weekend to remember with my dear husband, he took me to a beautiful resort for a long planned marriage conference our son gave us for Christmas! We had to wait months for this weekend, but it was a nice time with my darling husband. Our son even lent us his BMW to drive around in style, we usually drive our minivan :D So yes :) Life can be sad, but it is precious to celebrate the sweet moments of blessings we have upon this path of living, amidst the sadness we must endure in this sphere.
Date: 5/19/2023 12:57:00 AM
This poem is very emotive.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 5/23/2023 9:44:00 PM
Yes, I wrote it about a dear precious lady who I met when I was young, her sister Linda was like a mom to me in some ways, and I was so blessed to know their big beautiful multi-generational family, so many happy memories, and so shocked to learn she is gone to the other side. Life is beautiful, and yet, so very, very sad sometimes.
Date: 5/18/2023 9:51:00 PM
This poem reminds me to be thankful of the blessed hope. Thank You for sharing not only the heartfelt sorrow, but also the promise that awaits all those who believe. Another great write.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 5/23/2023 9:50:00 PM
Yes Anon, so thankful for the blessed hope, it eases our earthly sorrows in deep loss when one realizes the eternal blessings of a true believer. Your visit and comment to me is ever a blessing to me. Please pray for my dear friend Linda and her family. I know their hope is in a loving Heavenly Father, but she needs His sweet hugs right now, as does her entire closeknit family. It is heartbreaking, but faith in God helps ease the pain in a hope of forever.....
Date: 5/18/2023 3:30:00 PM
Oh, BJ, this is so beautiful, full of tears and promise. It's so sad - the older we get the more loved ones we lose.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 5/23/2023 10:02:00 PM
Hugs to you Ann, yes, the ink of this poem is certainly from my heartfelt tears. I know this friend must be very happy right now, there with her beautiful precious loved ones who have already flown to the other shore. She was a beauty, and to imagine her young again, happy, healthy and free of the heartbreak of this earth's trials and tribulations. The blessed hope. I pray her broken-hearted family on this side find the sweet hope, peace and comfort in remembering this. Her tasks and trials are done, but those on this side still run the race that is set before them, she has finished her race. I bet her reward is so lovely <3
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