Condolence

>>>>I wish to send my condolence to a family in the States,
         For the loss of a son and the heart aches it creates.
         A mother can tell theres no greater fear,
         Then to lose a love one you hold so dear.
 
         Troubles we in counter going through life,
         At times i am sure you could cut with a knife.
         He passed on in the middle of the night,
         No way of known, he had given up the fight.
 
         He was called my his mom to get out of bed,
         After calling him a few times, he dident move his head.
         She went in to check to see if he was ok,
         But he had already passed, he was on his way.

         His soul rest with you now Lord in heaven today,
         As the ones left behind, kneel and pray.
         Please watch over his soul, embrace him with love,
         For his soul was sent to the Lord , on wings of a dove.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/3/2009 4:32:00 AM
i really like your poem and know my mother will as well. It is hard on me to have lost my only sibling but i couldnt imagine how my mother felt to find him and lose a child. ty for being such a good friend to my mother and in the past to me
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Date: 3/21/2009 9:52:00 AM
Such a sad story for anyone to endure. Beautifull expressed faith in this write. You make the reader truly feel the love in this one. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/21/2009 9:10:00 AM
Very heartbreaking poem, Alan. Such a loss is difficult for a mother, but your faith provides God's gift of hope at the end. (This actually happened to one of my friends.)
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