Conditions

When you walk here, walk carefully
Walk without show of pride or class
The eyes are watching you hawkfully
Crouched in invisible guinea grass

Smile as you go, this is friendly country
"No problem" is the other motto here
Where thick wool covers the hungry
Like pale soldiers pride cover up dispear

Watch where you put your feet, please 
Keep on your shoes, it is not holy ground
The red lake is blood, we have no red seas
It may be thunder or a bullet's sound

Guns from armies dead in Iraq and Gaza
Our factories can only make ice cold beers
It is alright to dance, the love at the plaza
Is strange and real, there are other fears

Not grown here like banana or breadfruit
Imported from the continent knowingly
Keeping things in instability, a piper's flute
Edging the deep margins and cunningly

This is Jamaica, my island in the sun
Where deep colonial antiquities loll abroad
And sweet on beaches innocents run
Little children who call this place "yard."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hill Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 7:34 AM
This my friend is bring your world where people like me can understand. The Lord can use you to touch other people with the gift of words He has giften you.
Anderson Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 4:39 AM
i have no words... truly awe-inspiring. i look forward to more
P. Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 11:21 PM
So passionate and patriotic! and i would love to visit it someday! ~ Arany
Townsend Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 9:02 PM
Well written, capturing the love you have for Jamaica. You make the reader want to drop everything and go. Smiles from Lolita
Reynolds Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 5:40 PM
You are so very blessed to live in such a place. I've never been, but can imagine its beauty. your words in your comment to me, were like a dirty diamond, ready to be brushed off with stiff fingers, thank you. it is not often that someone can make my mind turn (usually it's me doing that. ;) and you did in that comment, so thank you! words cover us more...you are so right, for once we disrobe, we go back to the place we are all the same, there for, invisible. thank you, i love that! Kristin
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