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Conditional Love

This profound mode of being. The restrictive, limited, modified reasoning. His appeal to please me, his want to teach me, His need to simply need me; Diminishes more with every sunset, He loves me no longer and seemingly without regret. His love is conditional. Not unconditional- like a mothers love for her child. Why am i so riled? Because i can see it pass through his whole being, The coolness of his breath, The ice in his stare. This ache in my chest, I confess- has me lost between love and love-less.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/4/2024 12:20:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/13/2016 10:45:00 PM
Christina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/18/2009 6:37:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Christina. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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