Condemned

they stand no chance
the die is cast
condemned 
without a trial
guilt by association

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/20/2016 4:24:00 PM

Great truth spoken in this poem, Paul. As a Christian, the Lord Jesus was the poster child of an innocent being wrongly condemned, as are His followers in the centuries following. Anywho ... that's just how I feel. Very powerful message on a very sensitive subject. Excellent write. Love always from the RW (Romantic Warrior.)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/22/2016 4:00:00 AM

People are quick to condemn others, very often without bothering to seek the truth. Thank you for your contribution, Freddie; your comments are made with sense. Regards // paul

Cynthia Jones

Date: 3/23/2015 4:59:00 PM

Paul, too many people always end up being the scape goat. Great write. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia

Paul Callus
Date: 3/24/2015 5:58:00 PM

Thank you Cynthia for the insightful comment and support. All the best. // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/7/2014 6:22:00 PM

I find you guilty of writing great poetry, and thus condemn you here for years to come!!!!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/8/2014 5:49:00 AM

Thank you Arthur!! In that case I will plead...guilty! Your visits and comments are most welcome. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2014 11:17:00 AM

it is a tragedy for such people. At least a thousand have been executed when they were innocent in the past century of American history. Good topic to write on.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/30/2014 11:20:00 AM

Hi Andrea thanks for stopping by. Many are those found guilty due to coincidence /circumstances/etc. Unfortunately justice has only one eye. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/29/2014 4:00:00 PM

this poem is specific to persons who are wrongly accused............. suffering without a just cause...... :( sad to say that there are a lot like this nowadays....... realistic prose..... +++olive_eloi who whispered a prayer for those who are innocent yet they are condemned...

Paul Callus
Date: 3/29/2014 4:05:00 PM

Welcome to you Olive_eloi with the captivating smile :) your words of wisdom lay homage to my tanka. glad you appreciated it. :) blessings // paul