Line Gauthier Poet Concrete

Concrete Signs of Affection

a kiss
a touch
an invitation
a warm embrace
a concrete gesture
a kind word
a letter
a gift
a card
a note
a call
you
and
me
  x
   x         
    x      x             x
    x       x              x
      xx     x              x
         xx    x            xx
          xx   x            xx
            xx x           xx
             xx          xx
            xx       xx
    x    xx      xx
  x     xx
 xx    xx
 xx   xx
 xx   xx
  xx xx
   xxxx
I love that you
don’t wait
for a
special
occasion
to show your
tenderness and affection
you are generous with your time 
you give of yourself without restraint
your smile and laughter are contagious
you’re always thoughtful and considerate
you’re truly genuine and kindhearted
Thank you for the lovely bouquet
I lucked out when I married you, my darling, I love you



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

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Susan Ashley June 3, 2021 at 5:47 PM Dear Line, a moving and tender poem so beautiful in shape and sentiment. Your lovely image is full of love, admiration and appreciation. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Juliet's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Line Gauthier June 3, 2021 at 7:52 PM Thank you very much, Susan ~

Juliet Ligon May 23, 2021 at 6:38 PM Congratulations, Line! Beautiful concrete form that you created from the firm foundation of a strong marriage. Line Gauthier May 24, 2021 at 7:16 AM Thank you, Juliet. Much appreciated.

Susan Gentry April 19, 2018 at 11:39 AM I'm deciding if I want to try this. Amazing what you've done here! Line Gauthier April 19, 2018 at 12:49 PM Thank you so much, Susan. I'm sure you are very artistic and are being overly modest.

Cheryl Hoffman April 3, 2018 at 7:39 PM A lovely romantic concrete poem/image Line; Good luck in the contest!~Che :) Line Gauthier April 3, 2018 at 8:42 PM Thank you so much, Cheryl, for your lovely visit and comment.

Daniel Turner April 2, 2018 at 10:30 PM Such a declaration of love in a beautifully crafted poem, Line. good luck! This should be a winner. Line Gauthier April 3, 2018 at 8:43 PM Thank you so much, Daniel, for your lovely visit and comment.

Gershon Wolf April 2, 2018 at 5:22 PM Beautifully woven, Line. I am amazed at how you've done this...Truly touching read/view!! :) Gershon Line Gauthier April 2, 2018 at 8:41 PM Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.

Caren Krutsinger April 2, 2018 at 9:30 AM Line, if you have not entered this contest, you have no idea how much you should appreciate the typing of this. It's so HARD to type out a concrete poem! Well done, my friend! I love it! Line Gauthier April 2, 2018 at 8:40 PM Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Mike Gentile April 2, 2018 at 8:05 AM So well done, Line, Beautiful!!! Best for the contest xxoo Line Gauthier April 2, 2018 at 8:42 AM Thank you so much, Mike, for your much appreciated visist and comment.

Tom Cunningham April 2, 2018 at 7:38 AM Wow, not only a poet, an artist too. Beautifully done Line. Good luck in the contest. Tom Line Gauthier April 2, 2018 at 8:42 AM Thank you so much, Tom, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Silent One April 2, 2018 at 6:47 AM Love the shape, you did this so well Line... Line Gauthier April 2, 2018 at 7:19 AM Thank you, SO. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Sanjay Karmakar April 2, 2018 at 6:40 AM Nice love poem. Good luck, my dear poet. Line Gauthier April 2, 2018 at 7:19 AM Thank you, Sanjay. Much appreciated.