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Concrete Signs of Affection

a kiss a touch an invitation a warm embrace a concrete gesture a kind word a letter a gift a card a note a call you and me x x x x x x x x xx x x xx x xx xx x xx xx x xx xx xx xx xx x xx xx x xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xxxx I love that you don’t wait for a special occasion to show your tenderness and affection you are generous with your time you give of yourself without restraint your smile and laughter are contagious you’re always thoughtful and considerate you’re truly genuine and kindhearted Thank you for the lovely bouquet I lucked out when I married you, my darling, I love you AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on December 9, 2020 for contest MOST ORIGINAL by JULIET LIGON on April 4, 2020 for contest STRAND POETRY PICK 1 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND and April 2, 2018 for SOMETHING CONCRETE CONTEST sponsored by MAUREEN McGREAVY

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Date: 6/3/2021 5:47:00 PM
Dear Line, a moving and tender poem so beautiful in shape and sentiment. Your lovely image is full of love, admiration and appreciation. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Juliet's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2021 7:52:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan ~
Date: 5/23/2021 6:38:00 PM
Congratulations, Line! Beautiful concrete form that you created from the firm foundation of a strong marriage.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2021 7:16:00 AM
Thank you, Juliet. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/19/2018 11:39:00 AM
I'm deciding if I want to try this. Amazing what you've done here!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/19/2018 12:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. I'm sure you are very artistic and are being overly modest.
Date: 4/3/2018 7:39:00 PM
A lovely romantic concrete poem/image Line; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2018 8:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Cheryl, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 4/2/2018 10:30:00 PM
Such a declaration of love in a beautifully crafted poem, Line. good luck! This should be a winner.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2018 8:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 4/2/2018 5:22:00 PM
Beautifully woven, Line. I am amazed at how you've done this...Truly touching read/view!! :) Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 8:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 4/2/2018 9:30:00 AM
Line, if you have not entered this contest, you have no idea how much you should appreciate the typing of this. It's so HARD to type out a concrete poem! Well done, my friend! I love it!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 8:40:00 PM
Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 4/2/2018 8:05:00 AM
So well done, Line, Beautiful!!! Best for the contest xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mike, for your much appreciated visist and comment.
Date: 4/2/2018 7:38:00 AM
Wow, not only a poet, an artist too. Beautifully done Line. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 4/2/2018 6:47:00 AM
Love the shape, you did this so well Line...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 7:19:00 AM
Thank you, SO. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 4/2/2018 6:40:00 AM
Nice love poem. Good luck, my dear poet.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2018 7:19:00 AM
Thank you, Sanjay. Much appreciated.

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