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Concrete Kids and Halloween

kids in wigs tickle my r i b s Colorful glow in the dark costumes. Witches, vampires, monster, zombies, mummies , ghost, ghouls, pirates, fairies, and ninjas Giggles and tickles, filling their tummies with yummies They walk around the neighborhood knocking on doors with shouts “Trick - or- Treat! Fill my bag I want candy.” Darkness of twilight, shadows of moonlight, cold night. Carved pumpkins, lite candles flickering and dancing sitting on c o n c r e t e blocks, presence of a dark spirit near casting eerie chilling, howling fear. Haunted house, KEEP OUT sign, broken fence, harvest mouse. Bubbling caldrons, glittering white silhouette skeletal trees. Easterly wind perfect for a ride on a broom stick serenading the moon and play among the stars before it starts to fade into morning twilight. Don’t lose your way through haunted hallow you might stand in the absent of sound, fog hanging close to the ground and caressing, fear will come close This is Halloween 10/28/2016 Children Story

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Date: 6/3/2017 10:57:00 AM
This is neat, Halloween is my favorite holiday still :)
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Date: 2/5/2017 4:01:00 PM
I love the content of your Halloween pumpkin, Eve! So pleased to see this one on the winners' list...Congratulations!! Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/5/2017 1:33:00 PM
clever and cute Eve:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/5/2017 10:34:00 AM
Ha! Love it, Eve. That took some work...
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Date: 2/3/2017 10:03:00 PM
Perfectly captured the mood of Halloween. Amazing shape as well. Congratulations, Eve.
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Date: 11/3/2016 5:18:00 PM
Very merry little verse here my friend. Loved it. Wonderful imagery. I could see the little ones with their bags going door to door. . A seven from me. God Bless, A pleasure meeting you. Look forward to reading for you. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/30/2016 4:00:00 AM
Imagination at its best dear, Eve. Exquisite writin. A seven
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Date: 10/30/2016 12:25:00 AM
So creative and cute, as Tim says, a masterpiece!
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Date: 10/29/2016 1:01:00 PM
oh wow...a masterpiece
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Date: 10/29/2016 11:20:00 AM
like it! (could see the shape on fb, but couldn't read the words) very punkinesque! huggaboos ~ j
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Date: 10/29/2016 5:57:00 AM
- A creative and wonderful Halloween poems, Eve :) - Love shape poem, well done ! - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/29/2016 9:01:00 AM
Thank you sunshine they're not as good as yours but I'm going to try hugs Eve
Date: 10/29/2016 1:55:00 AM
Hi Eve lovely pumpkin, very well done and clever, there must be a trick to it so thank you for treating us to it, love it my friend, take care........Vera
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/29/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you dear friend

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