Concerning Human Nature

Our nature
is just to serve
ourselves.
We war against
those that -- to us -- are
not the same.
In truth
if we would
ever
look within
then perhaps
our own shortcomings
might rise into the light
of
a better nature.

9.5.18
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Contest: Human Nature
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 11:13 AM
So true, Jesse; very well penned and full of wisdom. Best of luck in the contest.
Messina Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 6:23 PM
Very well said, and well written, Jesse. Every bit true too...Best of luck in the contest!
Sergi Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Your poem evokes a positive philosophy and I wish you well
Rowe Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 2:21 PM
Thank you. What all poetry should aspire to do!
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September 5, 2018 at 10:59 AM
Lovely said :) Good luck!
Rowe Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 2:21 PM
Thank you, Maureen.
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