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Concealer

Bag of tricks contest sponsored by Linda-Marie 2 tankas 5/7/5/7/7 Concealer by Doris Culverhouse Concealer covers Restless nights, wrinkles and age Spackle for the face My bag of tricks will contain Light and dark sticks for all flaws Keep those telling flaws closely covered never let others see the real superficial me later Imperfections are pure

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Bl Devnath

Date: 9/5/2011 9:58:00 PM

Yes, majority assumes 'Imperfections are pure', nicely worded. Thanks for sharing. Nice to meet you. bl

Kash Poet

Date: 7/25/2011 10:35:00 PM

Congratulations Doris on your 1st place win.Enjoyed your poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/25/2011 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest Doris. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/25/2011 7:44:00 AM

hehe, Doris congratulations on your first place win with this witty one :) Wilma

David Williams

Date: 7/24/2011 4:07:00 AM

hey Doris, well done on a great win, congrats, David

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/23/2011 8:15:00 PM

great win. . .CONGRATULATIONS. . .smile *-* junjun

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2011 3:49:00 PM

Congrats on your high win with this one...Enjoyed reading this one..Maybe I need to get a 55 gallon drum of concealer..Mom

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/23/2011 2:01:00 PM

My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Doris

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 1:41:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your first place win and thankxx for your support luv... a great conception ...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 1:40:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your first place win and thankxx for your support luv... a great conception ...

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/23/2011 12:15:00 PM

congratulations on your win doris! I like your choice of subject. I try to cover my flaws too :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2011 12:03:00 PM

very interesting one and a quite a literal take on the theme, Doris. congratulations on your win. I really like this.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/17/2011 2:39:00 PM

Hey! Those wrinkles show character. So there. lol ;) Nice job here. God Bless, JB

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/13/2011 4:20:00 AM

There is more than meets the eye to most of us. Nicely worked double Tanka. Good luck in the contest. Love, Robert.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2011 6:29:00 AM

Hi! Hi! Doris, miss ya... but, I am wondering if you have returned yourself... Anyways... i am glad to be back and see you here... Great tanka,.. take care,..p.d.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/10/2011 12:11:00 PM

Happens to the best of us! Nice work - it's good to be in contact with you again! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Doris Culverhouse
Date: 7/10/2011 1:09:00 PM

Thanks Matthew!

Farah Chamma

Date: 7/10/2011 1:41:00 AM

Wonderful write...potent expressions..best of luck..farah

Doris Culverhouse
Date: 7/10/2011 1:10:00 PM

Thanks!!