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Compunction

The exemplar compunction of sorts released Exhumed from the shambles of the mind diseased By the comrade trusted with all dear life Even after death to care for his wife Bonds and bridges tightened and fastened Steady paced breaths and healing hastened Prevailing fellowship pronounced as light Nothing worth losing without an even flight Streaming change will not address The questions of life brushing distress After all has been said and all has been done The true test of character has only begun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 1:09:00 PM
Amaing write. Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 9/26/2009 11:42:00 AM
Interesting imagery forwards your thoughts in this poem. Much for the reader to think about. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/26/2009 4:00:00 AM
Congrats 2u on your poem making it through to the finals, bravo!
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2009 9:29:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/29/2009 9:29:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/28/2009 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 8/27/2009 8:46:00 AM
Wonderful writing
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:11:00 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/24/2009 8:15:00 AM
Rob,..congratulations on this well desereved feature this week !!! james
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rob. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2009 4:15:00 PM
now you've got my attention. very good rhyming and content. John H Loving III
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:37:00 AM
Good rhymes, effortles flow of thought .. powerful imageries ... great poem. Your character has definitely won in this one. Love and light
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Date: 4/10/2009 3:36:00 AM
Rob, your poem is superb and excellent. Welcome to poetrysoup and congratulations on your featured poem this week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:57:00 PM
Your poem is so true and so well stated. Congratulations on being featured this week. Always, Daneann
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Date: 4/8/2009 11:51:00 PM
Awesome and truthful write. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/8/2009 8:05:00 PM
Rob - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/8/2009 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :)
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha"
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2009 2:34:00 AM
Way to go, Rob! Congrats for being featured. Cheers, Teri
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Date: 4/5/2009 11:06:00 PM
Hi Rob! Congrats on making feature. I'm really proud of you! Keep on. ~ Love, Andy.
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Date: 4/5/2009 10:05:00 PM
Congrats to you on your superb write being featured this week, bravo Rob...welcome to soupland! Cheers, Ernesto
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Date: 4/5/2009 10:00:00 AM
This is an excellent poem. Welcom to Poetry Soup
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