Composition
In an empty space I wrote the words;
As I read my work it create the chords.
It's playing in my head like audio records;
It made me smile but i ran out of words.
As I tried to post it so the world may see it;
I was so excited like eating sweet dessert.
I read them once again in my mind with a beat;
Grinning as I press the button to share it.
So bad to see, the next thing surprised me.
"Invalid fields" appeared in screen - no way
So disappointed, my works was just wasted
Every word I wrote in was just deleted.
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