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In an empty space I wrote the words; As I read my work it create the chords. It's playing in my head like audio records; It made me smile but i ran out of words. As I tried to post it so the world may see it; I was so excited like eating sweet dessert. I read them once again in my mind with a beat; Grinning as I press the button to share it. So bad to see, the next thing surprised me. "Invalid fields" appeared in screen - no way So disappointed, my works was just wasted Every word I wrote in was just deleted.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/16/2024 5:43:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/23/2016 12:01:00 PM
sad when that happens, Rube-Anna. LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 4:25:00 PM
Rube-Anna, wow, that is deep... well expressed. SKAT
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