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Complimentary Loaf

Complimentary Loaf “Your bread is perfect” “Thanks” I said “That’s what I kneaded” 10/11/18 Written for: The Baker’s Dozen Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy

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Date: 10/16/2018 10:04:00 AM

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This great word play was just what *I* needed this morning. Cook treats on your 1st place win.

Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 10:24:00 AM

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Thanks so much Jesse

Date: 10/16/2018 8:16:00 AM

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Enjoyable play on words, Chris:) Congrats on placing first! Regards // paul

Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2018 10:24:00 AM

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Thanks so much Paul

Date: 10/15/2018 4:39:00 PM

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Exactly how Maureen likes it! Best wishes and congrats. ~ Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 5:26:00 PM

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Thanks so much

Date: 10/15/2018 2:22:00 PM

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Very clever..Congrats on your win..

Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 2:28:00 PM

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Thanks so much Joseph

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/15/2018 4:50:00 AM

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And this win is just what you needed. congrats dear Chris, have a wonderful day.

Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 8:26:00 AM

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Thank you so very much Pixie Dust

Date: 10/15/2018 2:17:00 AM

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dropping back with my congrats Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 8:26:00 AM

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Thanks Jan, I appreciate it.

Date: 10/14/2018 6:47:00 PM

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:) Okay, I have enjoyed that sandwich, because it was just what I needed. You are very clever and creative. Congratulations Chris, on this win. ~ Brandy

Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 8:25:00 AM

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Thank you so very much Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2018 2:41:00 PM

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oh I sure remember this one. Big congrats on your win with this cute one.

Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 8:25:00 AM

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Thanks a bunch Andrea

Date: 10/14/2018 2:33:00 PM

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Sounds like teamwork. Congrats on your top win, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 8:25:00 AM

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Thank you so very much

Date: 10/14/2018 10:03:00 AM

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Smart one,,, " Thats what I needed """ :) great win

Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 8:25:00 AM

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Thank you so much Eve.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/14/2018 9:44:00 AM

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Giggles galore! I love it Chris! You know how to butter my pan ;) thank you and congratulations! xomo

Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 8:25:00 AM

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Thank you my friend for all of your kindness, It is a thrill and an honor to place so high in your contest. I am glad that you liked this one so much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2018 5:57:00 PM

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haha. I LOVE it . the word plays are my favorite type.

Chris Green
Date: 10/12/2018 9:17:00 AM

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Thanks so much Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/11/2018 2:38:00 PM

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Ah, such a witty senryu, Chris! Absolutely love it and wish you success in the contest. Not that you "kneaded" my wishes to succeed. LOL Hugs, Carolyn

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2018 3:00:00 PM

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Thank you so much Carolyn. I am thrilled you liked my little slice of humor. : )

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/11/2018 2:24:00 PM

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I wrote long, blinked and my comments were gone. Do you think electronics might be female? Believe it or not, I DIDN'T see where this was heading and thoroughly enjoyed my corny-inspired, throat and gut deep laughter. May this rise in the contest! All the best, all the days ... CayCay

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2018 2:31:00 PM

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Thanks so very much my friend. I appreciate you leaving such nice comments for me always

Date: 10/11/2018 11:49:00 AM

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Cute!! This is just what I was needing. :) Thank you for the smile. I think I am needing a sandwich now. :) Perhaps. ~ Brandy

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2018 11:51:00 AM

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Thanks so much Brandy. I'm with you, a sandwich right now sounds really good. : )

Date: 10/11/2018 11:46:00 AM

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ha ha ha very clever word play Chris, so lovely to see your fun side!:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2018 11:51:00 AM

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Thanks Jan. It's just my half-baked attempt at writing something for the contest. : )

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/11/2018 11:24:00 AM

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lol, that's a good one, gl in the contest

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2018 11:50:00 AM

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Thanks so much Pixie Dust

Date: 10/11/2018 11:17:00 AM

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This write stirs the senses, and I don't just mean the olfactory one...the aroma of freshly baked bread. It's the kneading part that inspires the other senses ;-). Well done, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2018 11:50:00 AM

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Thanks so much Lin. Just the thought of that aroma makes me smile or maybe I am just hungry. : )

Date: 10/11/2018 10:57:00 AM

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Ok, I think I will change mine to Senryu. Thanks :)

Date: 10/11/2018 10:38:00 AM

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Great one! Cute, So creative :) Hmm.. I think I should have labeled mine a Senryu?? I wasn't sure what form it was. lol

Chris Green
Date: 10/11/2018 10:40:00 AM

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Thanks Heidi. I initially labeled mine "I do not know?" Then went and found a few others for the contest and they were all labeled "Senryu", so I changed mine. : )

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