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explicit she makes eye contact ~ implicit he takes off wedding ring By David Kavanagh

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Date: 9/12/2021 2:35:00 PM
I enjoyed the deviousness of this fine Monoku, David. You say much about infidelity in just a single line. Best wishes, Brian
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/12/2021 2:59:00 PM
Thank you Brian, It is quite devious, this one takes a bit of figuring out, but I love the challenge of the monoku, cheers David
Date: 7/30/2021 12:06:00 PM
Great Monoku, David, when she looks him in the eyes as he takes his promise ring from his finger. If you can manage little tasks, you can handle major ones. It's OK to be a bit dishonest if you're doing something minor.. But if you're doing anything more significant, you won't be able to be fully honest. Good luck in the contest.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/30/2021 12:19:00 PM
Indeed Lasaad, some to and fro going on with the implicit and explicit, he took the explicit look as understood, which in fact is implicitly implied, but he was the one being explicit by actually removing the wedding ring, thank you for looking in, cheers David
Date: 7/30/2021 11:54:00 AM
Hello David Kavanagh, i guess he did not want to show he was a married man. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2021 11:29:00 AM
Hello David Kavanagah, yes it does look like he knew what he was doing. Oh a bit more going on with the play on words. makes sense. Cheers! Darlene
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/30/2021 12:13:00 PM
He certainly knew what he was doing Darlene, but a little more going on here with the play on words, cheers David
Date: 7/30/2021 10:48:00 AM
We men can be such fools. Well said!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/30/2021 12:11:00 PM
Indeed we can Joe, although this one could possibly be reversed by some femme fatale, cheers David