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Complicit

explicit she makes eye contact ~ implicit he takes off wedding ring


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David Kavanagh

allusionbetrayalcrushmonoku

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Brian Sambourne

September 12, 2021 at 2:35 PM

I enjoyed the deviousness of this fine Monoku, David. You say much about infidelity in just a single line. Best wishes, Brian

David Kavanagh

September 12, 2021 at 2:59 PM

Thank you Brian, It is quite devious, this one takes a bit of figuring out, but I love the challenge of the monoku, cheers David

Sotto Poet

July 30, 2021 at 12:06 PM

Great Monoku, David, when she looks him in the eyes as he takes his promise ring from his finger. If you can manage little tasks, you can handle major ones. It's OK to be a bit dishonest if you're doing something minor.. But if you're doing anything more significant, you won't be able to be fully honest. Good luck in the contest.

David Kavanagh

July 30, 2021 at 12:19 PM

Indeed Lasaad, some to and fro going on with the implicit and explicit, he took the explicit look as understood, which in fact is implicitly implied, but he was the one being explicit by actually removing the wedding ring, thank you for looking in, cheers David