' Complicated ' 5th Senryu

‘ Complicated ’

Give Me Crème-Fill-Cake
Complicated Cookies Bake
Nuts, That I Can’t Take ! ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Sounds good to me, MooBee, I think I got the picture, but I like nuts too. Sincerely Moses
Pickett Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 11:54 AM
HaHa....This senryu brought a smile to my face.... Much needed before a long night......:JP]
Moreno Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 10:27 AM
Nice senryu/monorhyme. Sounds complicated.
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