Complex Love

I know the common symptoms 
of our consequences 
or where drama sends us.
Thats why i try to find an emblem 
that will bind our missions.                                   
But, You lie to listen
which replys your mind is a sign of wisdom, 
And, i dont mind to mention one of my intentions
its to Save a girl who Hates the world but still walked by and missed it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mclaughlin Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 4:10 PM
this seems a very profound piece and almost loving this girl who can't seem to get it right.
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October 4, 2008 at 6:04 AM
Congratulations of being featured this week. This is a very interesting poem. Great job! ~Joseph
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October 4, 2008 at 5:41 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2008 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations Ryan, on "Complex Love" being featured this week. Vince
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September 22, 2008 at 5:09 AM
Congratulations Ryan on your poetry being featured this week. Well done. Love, Shar
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