Complex Alliteration - Hastily Hiding Wisely Waiting

HASTILY HIDING WISELY WAITING Flying fish are really gliding, gracefully so. Frantically, from so many predatory piranhas. Silkily, sliding into the most fearsome fray! Hastily hiding, in very thick growing, sightly sedges. Wisely waiting until the predators pass. Satisfyingly safe, start to safely fly feeding. Dusk darkening, welcoming much needed silent sleep.
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October 30, 2017 at 5:56 AM
Clever poetry... Great alliteration..
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October 31, 2017 at 6:02 AM
A fun format, thank you Silent :)
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