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He completed His artistry on the seventh day.

 

  God completed

His artistry on the

  Seventh Day.

Six days of work for the Master Artist, creating a universe, bestowing life. After looking back on His outline, God colored emotions for Adam and his wife. Between His sketches of sea and sky, Blue hues He chose, endowing serenity. He awakened nature’s forests with strokes of green, employing earth tones to convey humility. Red and yellow flowers He painted to bring joy; white clouds in the heavens added purity. Rainbow tints filled God’s world with emotions, leaving no colors in obscurity. Before one final act, He debated “free will,” so desirous that each human life form be welcome in His eternal kingdom. But no one, He decided, should be forced to conform. Material things God created en masse were mere outlines with possibilities. To make life worth living, He continued day seven, giving man love, joy and merciful abilities. *October 24, 2018 For Curtis Moorman’s contest: “What Did God Do on the Seventh Day?”

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Date: 12/5/2018 10:33:00 AM
Carolyn, a beautiful write, well done, my poem did not place in the contest either, so oh well who cares, right ~
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/5/2018 10:45:00 AM
C'est la vie, Dear Heart. I still enjoyed writing it.
Date: 11/10/2018 10:53:00 AM
Hmmm, no winner? Mine i knew would not do well. It was on the humorous or blasphemous side I guess. But yours was a real beauty! Carolyn, you mentioned Careless Whispers. I just adore that song!!! I did not know he had died. I saw his concert with my daughter. I remember dancing while standing the entire time. So cool! And i was so skinny back then!!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/10/2018 2:35:00 PM
Yes, George Michael died of cardiomyopathy on Christmas 2016. "Careless Whispers" is my favorite romantic song for slow dancing.
Date: 10/29/2018 6:09:00 PM
Thank goodness for day seven..we certainly rejoice love, joy, and mercy. You write such wonderful poetry. Best for a win, Carolyn.
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Date: 10/29/2018 4:35:00 PM
I’m captivated by your convincing work.. you leave me intotal awe girl!!
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Date: 10/29/2018 7:38:00 AM
This is just wonderful poetry, Carolyn. I am sure Curtis will love it. God Bless and best wishes for a win...Charlie
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/29/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie!
Date: 10/27/2018 4:59:00 PM
what a thoughtful piece this is, Carolyn. Very original and poetic. I am almost afraid to post my entry. It's just whimsical and hopefully not sacreligious! (in limerick form and not posted yet) I am so behind at Soup, as I said in my email I think I will go through the haiku winners since it will be easy to do it fast but i hope to see your sonnet winners as well. Thanks so much for the 4th place from you and Jack!!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/27/2018 6:40:00 PM
I know how much you love reading the poems here and am glad you finally have some time for it again. Jack and I judged blindly, so you earned your spot. Hugs, Carolyn
Date: 10/27/2018 2:46:00 PM
A true blessing and to have found read and so enjoyed this gem my dear friend! Faith, Light and Truth is its core and its sincere heart shown. Beautiful, important and the work of another great artist with golden pen.. A fav..... a brilliantly glowing jewel...
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/27/2018 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. Your comments mean a great deal to me!
Date: 10/27/2018 8:46:00 AM
Creation was perfectly executed, Carolyn, as your lovely words show. The importance of 'free will' is a necessary and decisive factor in our life. Regards & Hugs // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/27/2018 4:20:00 PM
Paul, thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts! Free will makes each of us unique. Hugs, Carolyn
Date: 10/25/2018 4:31:00 PM
How many of his favours can you deny? Great poem for the contest, you have covered so much in this..
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/27/2018 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One. The emotions God bestowed truly seem to make life worth living.
Date: 10/25/2018 3:30:00 PM
Oh yes, Carolyn, you take one on the perfect journey, love how you weave your colours in to this beautiful poem...
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/27/2018 8:03:00 AM
Each color represents a different emotion or quality that God bestowed on us. Thanks for reading, Harry!
Date: 10/25/2018 7:36:00 AM
On the seventh day he rested and said if you don't be good I will sent Trump to screw everything up.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/26/2018 10:37:00 PM
LOL You're so funny!
Date: 10/25/2018 7:36:00 AM
Very nice, Andrea! Love “mere outlines with possibilities “
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/27/2018 8:05:00 AM
Oops, Carolyn here not Andrea, but thanks for reading, Kim!
Date: 10/25/2018 12:17:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, I enjoyed the faith you portrayed in this poem, and your calm serene character and nature is portrayed with every line in fact every word you put on paper. Well done a great write! xoxo, Jennifer
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/27/2018 8:05:00 AM
What a lovely thing to say, Jennifer. I must read some of your work!
Date: 10/24/2018 4:42:00 PM
Nice entry for the contest, Carolyn. I so enjoyed your take on Creation. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 10/24/2018 1:02:00 PM
A super piece Carolyn, a real blessing to read, so uplifting and encouraging. Have a blessed God filled day, Gordon
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/24/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon. I'll check out one of your poems now.
Date: 10/24/2018 12:59:00 PM
- You write this as beautiful painting ... and that's exactly what it is, Carolyn :) - Unfortunately, human choices are not always so good - Best wishes for you and in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/24/2018 2:51:00 PM
Yes, God is an artist, Sunshine, and if you look at some of unusual creatures he created, you'll find He had a sense of humor too. Thanks for reading, Hon.
Date: 10/24/2018 12:13:00 PM
Beautiful verse Carolyn, freewill he gave us but with a warning and yet many have chosen the wrong path. They will only have themselves to blame. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
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Date: 10/24/2018 12:01:00 PM
In faith we are all equals no matter our station in life and the greatest gift is of free will I think. You have expressed this so beautifully in your lovely poem Carolyn. I am sure your entry will shine in this contest! : ) xxoo
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/29/2018 11:29:00 AM
Thank you, Connie! Aloha
Date: 10/24/2018 11:22:00 AM
This was beautifully expressed Carolyn. Your heart shines brightly in this wonderful poem of faith and blessings. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/24/2018 11:51:00 AM
I appreciate your comments, Chris. Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/24/2018 11:04:00 AM
Ah, he is a wonderful God indeed and you are a great writer , blessed amongst the rest. Thanks for sharing, have a wonderful day dear Carolyn.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/24/2018 11:26:00 AM
You're sweet. Thanks for reading.

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