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Completely Dependent On You

I hang from the strings I tied to you that I’m too afraid to cut; too afraid to tug on when you can’t feel my weight. I'll cut myself some slack, only for you to pluck at them once more. The strings are thinning out; I'm thinning out. Please do not let the strings break, for I break with them.

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Date: 10/2/2017 10:38:00 AM
You write so well. The emotional appeal in this line touches deep within. Quoting it... Please do not let the strings break, for I break with them. Thank you poet for its sharing.
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Mary Lou
Date: 10/8/2017 10:59:00 AM
my pleasure, thank you so much!

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