Complaint

Sleepy dawn unfurls
A wet morning steers;
Walkway ripples swirl
With busy feet here.


Sunday looks tired
From overnight rain;
Heavy eyelids mired
With cold draft refrain.


Stumbling out of bed
Jerky knees feel stiff;
Bones ache flinging dread
In dreary cold tiff.


The sun comes out late
With a fumbling light;
Feels hard to debate
This stark August sight.


Awakening feels
Like a waste of sleep;
Steady warmth can heal
The piercing cold deep.


I hear sound snoring
In regular beats;
Cold taxing morning 
Steals much body heat.


Awareness sleeps well
As heavy feet slide;
Blurry thoughts in-dwell
Stiff cold air presides.



Leon Enriquez
03 August 2014
Singapore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Revolution Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Nice poem, good imagery. :)
Enriquez Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Dear B Maxine: Thanks for the kind comments. Leon
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