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Competition

I went to the Country Buffet for lunch to stay with my two favorite cousins, Vicky and Ray. We decided to compete, the most who will eat will win and claim to the losers' defeat. Well Vicky ate all the crumbs left on her plate. She had six scoops of spaghetti, and seven servings of mac'n cheese... almost eight. And well, Ray, he had the entire sea. He ate whatever that use to be. The lobster and shrimp, the salmon and crab. He had servings for nine from the sea-shack. But I had ten plates of vegetables steam, and five steaks with a side of potatoes and cheese, and eleven cups of spinach cream. I laughed and pointed at Vicky and Ray, but my stomach started to turn and I puked all of next day. o-O

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Date: 6/9/2009 10:59:00 AM
Brittany, I enjoy the lighthearted fun you seem to have writing this fun piece! love it! and thanks for kind comments! Jim
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