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Compassion For a Cactus

You handsome fellow standing erect and unassuming in your clay pot never moving a muscle of your prickly being nor muttering a complaint I know what you are thinking as you stare out my window at the blanket of white Why are you not in the heat of the desert under an azure sky drinking in the sunshine that is rightfully yours! How dare someone take away the wide open spaces of your childhood! the beauty of the evening sunset and night sky that only the desert knows! Your silent curses will be a punishment by not rewarding me with the beauty of a flower - Yes, that will do it.. I will have to be content to stare at your lanky spiraling body which will stick a finger and make it bleed But, since I do feel your pain you shall have a larger pot in which to live so you may grow lean and old and think of what might have been..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/4/2008 11:32:00 AM
Neat alliterative title! Excellent personification... i must try one. Full of poignant emotion and splendid word use... BRAVO Valerie! Best wishes, Keith (PS if you can stand it, please take a look at 'Portrait;' it's one long extended poem so you need only comment once!)
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Date: 11/17/2008 5:04:00 PM
Poor Cactus. I watch the snowfall and feel for the guy. Send me somewhere warm. Now, but not in the after life. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/7/2008 5:32:00 AM
You not only briught this to life, you gave it an identity. It must feel just as you wrote. So clear and flowing and makes me sad for the potted cactus. Michael
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Date: 11/7/2008 3:59:00 AM
A very creative and nice use of subject - cactus :) Teri
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Date: 11/5/2008 4:15:00 PM
Valerie you are so talented . I can't waite to read the rest of all your poems. In time I will wow. kGod bless you and thnk you for your kind comments Micahel Torres.
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Date: 11/5/2008 1:47:00 PM
Excellent write Val great theme and creative thoughts. Loved it very much. God bless you Michael
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Date: 11/5/2008 11:51:00 AM
I love this...a cactus with an attitude! Not coming forth with a flower just out of spite! Great poem, Valerie!! ~ :) Love, Carrie
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