Jo Bien Poet Free verse

Comparisons

can you really compare?
day to night
apples to oranges
is it that easy?
day is for work
night is for stars and dreaming
a lack of complexity
too many depths
look deeper
I am night and longing
an apparition, visualization
floating through your dreams
touching on your senses
all of them 
leaving a taste
of all that was
of all that can be

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Orphani ..........O August 20, 2009 at 2:41 AM i really like this work J i'ts juiced up.but i think "apples to oranges" lets out air here it's clech'e your concept is powerful in it's comparison and would walk with a bigger foot with no clech'e otherwise i love it. o