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Comparisons

can you really compare? day to night apples to oranges is it that easy? day is for work night is for stars and dreaming a lack of complexity too many depths look deeper I am night and longing an apparition, visualization floating through your dreams touching on your senses all of them leaving a taste of all that was of all that can be

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Date: 8/20/2009 2:41:00 AM
i really like this work J i'ts juiced up.but i think "apples to oranges" lets out air here it's clech'e your concept is powerful in it's comparison and would walk with a bigger foot with no clech'e otherwise i love it. o
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