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You’re lovely…
Like the sun saying good morning to the vast blue sea
Like the moon sitting idle, shining lover’s light for me
Like the stars in the heaven that twinkle as they dance
Like the burnt red shades of dusk, inspiring all romance

The vastness of the heavens and the gifts upon this earth
The gentleness of new born babies, soon after their birth
The birds that fly so freely, reaching forever to the sky
They’re all so beautiful, yet you’re the focus of my eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gass Avatar
March 4, 2009 at 9:56 PM
What a truly sweet and romantic poem this is, Michael! Such lovely visuals! Beautiful work! Love, Robin
Mccall Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 8:56 PM
I really love this poem assoume write
Strand Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 12:05 AM
Like the krielle flavour Michael.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
March 1, 2009 at 4:57 PM
So romantic...so lovely, who wouldn't melt with this one?? ~ Carrie
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