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Comparing Your Poems Is Not a Great Thing To Do

No matter how wonderful your writing is Someone else will say it better with a pen that is more magical Sometimes with poetry, other times with prose To compare your missive to theirs is to turn your poem into a dust rag. It could get moldy and dank, and stinky; you might elect to throw it into a ditch. Whether or not she continues to survive and hold her head up with pride is up to you. Remember how proud you were of her yesterday? Let's go back to that.

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Date: 6/2/2021 1:18:00 PM
Mine are just a load of poop so i dont care what they say lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/3/2021 2:02:00 AM
Jan this is hilarious! We both know this is a crappy thing to say about your poems; I think your muse might have something to say about this today!
Date: 6/2/2021 11:44:00 AM
Hellom Caren, I agree. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2021 10:25:00 AM
Hello Caren, you are welcome. Hugs.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/3/2021 2:02:00 AM
Thank you Darlene.
Date: 6/2/2021 9:46:00 AM
Good thinking!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/3/2021 10:20:00 AM
OMG, what was she thinking? I'd never trash anything I've written simply because 1, 2, or 5 people didn't like it. I must admit, however, that my wife once sold one of my "paintings" in a yard sale after she refused to allow me to hang it in our house. It was pretty bad, I must admit!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/3/2021 2:03:00 AM
My girlfriend bragged to us all the way to art class about how much she loved her painting. On the way home she threw it in the trash because the jurying panel would not accept it in the art show. I was horrified!
Date: 6/2/2021 4:25:00 AM
Agree with you!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/2/2021 8:03:00 AM
I like to not compare my poems even to each other.
Date: 6/2/2021 4:10:00 AM
There are always those whose ego wants to cry out, "Mine is better." A lesson in humbleness is in order. Good point, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/2/2021 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Jenna

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