Daniel Cheeseman Poet Rhyme

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Suns setting, stardust falling
Dawn rising, Skylarks calling
Flowers dance of different hue
But nought to compare with you

Painters paint, poets write
Sculptors work marble white
See things with eyes so true
But nought to compare with you

Natures kind, untold gifts
Discards grey, colour lifts
Seas of green, skies blue
But nought to compare with you

And when I wake at your side
From those dreams I did ride
Places visited seemed so true
But nought to compare with you

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 26, 2010 at 3:14 PM Such lovely sentiments Daniel.. gracious poetry so touching and beautiful... flowing words for a theme of luv... luv.. Linda-Marie

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2010 at 1:22 PM Yes, Carolyn is right. This would be great on valentine's day. You are gearing right up for it with these two first poems! Luv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire January 26, 2010 at 12:47 PM This would make a lovely verse for a Valentine's card, Daniel. Women long to hear the words you speak, suggesting all else that is beautiful is "naught" compared to them. You are a very romantic man! Love and admiration, Carolyn

James Fraser January 26, 2010 at 12:04 PM Daniel, what a lovely poem to read. Its obviously aimd at someone special >> James