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Suns setting, stardust falling Dawn rising, Skylarks calling Flowers dance of different hue But nought to compare with you Painters paint, poets write Sculptors work marble white See things with eyes so true But nought to compare with you Natures kind, untold gifts Discards grey, colour lifts Seas of green, skies blue But nought to compare with you And when I wake at your side From those dreams I did ride Places visited seemed so true But nought to compare with you

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Date: 1/26/2010 3:14:00 PM
Such lovely sentiments Daniel.. gracious poetry so touching and beautiful... flowing words for a theme of luv... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/26/2010 1:22:00 PM
Yes, Carolyn is right. This would be great on valentine's day. You are gearing right up for it with these two first poems! Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:47:00 PM
This would make a lovely verse for a Valentine's card, Daniel. Women long to hear the words you speak, suggesting all else that is beautiful is "naught" compared to them. You are a very romantic man! Love and admiration, Carolyn
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:04:00 PM
Daniel, what a lovely poem to read. Its obviously aimd at someone special >> James
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