Companions of the Night

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*Image of Earth-Moon Orbit by Pixabay. Companions of the Night A life partner advances and sashay orients a midnight blue chamber room. Recast as sparkles, prompts unsealed cachet dawns blessing past twilight upon the groom. Marital rapture, quietude splendor, and tantalizing tides affect its mood. Affections high, stimulate surrender, low-keyed attractions, reliant subdued. A bluish globe and whitish counterpart skirt the heavens and their nearby harems. Though *two unloved passersby, they depart like unacknowledged heroic sirens. Duality, from beginning to end, luminescence shreds darkness constants friend. *Venus and Mercury have no moons. 2022 November 17 *1st Place* Beauty Of Night Contest ~~Sotto Poet: Judging 2022 November 17 RZ & HMS.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/18/2022 1:09:00 PM

- Both listening and reading this beautiful poem, congratulations on your top first place in the contest :) -

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/18/2022 4:17:00 PM

Admirable expressions, Anne-Lise, honorable praises indeed my friend, Aloha William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/17/2022 10:16:00 PM

Big Congrats to win TOP Too tough Concluding lines are marvelous. Blessings always.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/18/2022 2:07:00 AM

Many thanks, Anisha, for your welcoming words are appreciated my friend, Aloha William

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/17/2022 7:49:00 PM

Very beautiful writing on the constellation. Very suspense-filled. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/17/2022 8:03:00 PM

Thank you, Christuraj, for you are my constant companion and friend, Aloha William

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/17/2022 5:03:00 PM

This winning piece has excellent lines, William. Congratulations on winning first place in my contest.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/17/2022 5:24:00 PM

Lasaad, I'm truly grateful to have participated in this contest, even though I missed the one prior, I appreciate it my friend, Aloha William