Commuting

rain showers
          turn into deluge -
          train delayed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 4:36 PM
I am also reading Robert Petitt's comments as I go through your poems. He sure has seen many of them too!!
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 5:16 PM
Reminds me of Sheena Easton and her hit song "Morning Train".
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