Communion

With years of well practised wordless command
through darkness you reach out and take my hand
thumb slides along your palm, stops at your wrist
you, motionless, no effort to resist.
Both kneeling in the dark we hold the pose
your pulse beckons, my breathing starts to slow.
Our heads inches apart,  not wont to touch
so little contact, yet still means so much.
Remembering your tresses, copper hues
long lashes crown a gaze in sapphire blue.
My thumb around your arm now circling
on skin so smooth once, now papyrus thin.
Decades have passed but although we have changed
our bond still strong as steel, long to remain
from strangers into lovers now just friends
we remain in  our communion till the end.
Time now for me to let you go once more
so I can pass your food under the door.


29th July 2015
For contest 'Poem with a chilling twist' by Frank Herrera

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/1/2015 2:53:00 AM
This is a brilliant poem in a chilling twist my dear friend, Viv! A winner for me. I enjoyed so much reading it! Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well for your kind visit and your lovely words on one of my humble poems. Best wishes and more blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/1/2015 9:56:00 AM
Thanks, Leonora, I appreciate yourvisit and comments. enjoy your poetry. Viv x
Date: 7/30/2015 9:15:00 AM
Can't stop smirking!
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James Inman
Date: 7/31/2015 12:05:00 PM
Took your sage advice. Looking forward to comments if you read it. Thanks, rjijr "Sweet and Gentle"-Name of the poem, not you-although I'm sure you are-not that I would know anything about that-let me stop while I'm ahead, or behind-I didn't just say that!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/30/2015 4:00:00 PM
As mentioned, James, have a go- give us a twist. Looking forward to it. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/30/2015 9:13:00 AM
You are perfect for this contest. I was thinking about entering but there is no need now. This has to be a winner.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/30/2015 4:00:00 PM
James, never take any contest entrant at face value- I have seen some cracking entries that should have won in my opinion feature quite low, it's anybody's game. Have a go, and good luck. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/29/2015 10:03:00 PM
Last verse got me.. Great poem and a pleasure to read!! A7 my friend....
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/30/2015 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Robert. Fortunately I am no Norman Bates. Regards to you and yours, Viv
Date: 7/29/2015 9:54:00 AM
Wha...is the woman with mental issues, confined in a closed-door room, Viv? So sad, and yes, chilling...But you nailed the theme, IMHO. All the best in the contest. hugs!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/29/2015 11:59:00 AM
I can't tell you anything more, Kim, but- you are welcome to come round for tea......... mmmmmm...... nah, sorry, I can't do the creepy guy thing. Love 'n hugs, Viv x
Date: 7/28/2015 11:01:00 PM
What's on the menu Viv; pizza or pancake? As usual, your poem delivers much interest and is chillingly sad. Time does take a toll - Lindsay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/29/2015 12:06:00 PM
I suppose, Lindsay, that a pancake would be practical, under the circumstances. Or under the door. Maybe I just flipped... Thanks for dropping by, regards, Viv
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