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Communing With the Night

A flame among the heavens. Burning midnight sky. Afterwards, in the burnt ashes. Are where the flames now lie. We've had our little visit. Communing with the night. Showing all the universe. Inner earthly light. For Nette's contest, shine with your Naani. Written by Robert Johnson on June 23rd, 2014

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Date: 10/31/2014 4:12:00 PM
An where you be this eve/night?? Our communing again?? lol Love this and I also see congrats are in order !!! Well done my friend !!
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Date: 7/23/2014 3:46:00 PM
Robert :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/4/2014 10:11:00 AM
Robert, Congratulations, in Nette's " SHINE WITH YOUR NAANI!!" Contest :) LINDA
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Robert Johnson
Date: 7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM
Hello Linda, always nice to have you visit. Appreciate your warm heart. Thanks. Peace. :)
Date: 7/3/2014 10:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, my friend. Glad to see you on the winners' list. You did quite well with your first time on this unusual form.
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Date: 7/4/2014 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. You did quite well yourself. :)
Date: 7/1/2014 4:14:00 PM
nothing could be better than celestial connection; this one glows, robert. thanks for gracing my contest and sweet congrats on your fine win.. huggs
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Date: 7/4/2014 8:58:00 AM
Thank you nette. It was a fun little challenge.
Date: 7/1/2014 1:42:00 PM
Hi Robert - Bravo on your fine win - well deserved, my friend! This is such a lovely write!
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Date: 7/4/2014 8:59:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words Pandita.
Date: 7/1/2014 1:03:00 PM
Beautiful write and win, Robert, Mohan
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Date: 6/25/2014 5:03:00 PM
beautiful write - a sure winner : )
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Date: 6/24/2014 9:07:00 PM
You are welcome Robert... Linda
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Date: 6/24/2014 5:19:00 PM
hello Robert, I like that you are enjoying the soup's contest. I like the inner feeling of this poem. Wishing you the best of luck...Linda
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Robert Johnson
Date: 6/24/2014 6:34:00 PM
Thanks P.D.
Date: 6/24/2014 3:34:00 PM
very nice one for her contest, Robert. It's a good contest,don't you think? Change "lye" to "lie" in case she is looking at your spelling.
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Robert Johnson
Date: 6/24/2014 6:32:00 PM
Thanks for the heads up on lie. And yes, the meter is kind of interesting.

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