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Communication

I say I need you You hear I want you I say I love you You hear I need you I say come live with me. You hear please support me. I say I'm too tired You hear I don't want you. If you would LISTEN to the words as they are SAID then what you THINK they mean won't tear us APART.

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/27/2012 6:28:00 PM

I agree with Deborah although I'm not an expert..enjoyed this poem...INK-U-SCRIPT

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/27/2012 3:28:00 PM

TLee..."Venus and Mars"...lol ...bless their hearts hun, they just cant help it...keep trying....sometimes new battle battle plans work wonders ;) big hugs,love ~deb love the write

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/27/2012 4:53:00 PM

When in doubt ask should be the moto of both Venus and Mars. The heck with this guessing foolishness. Thanks Deb glad you enjoyed this. May the warmth of love make a home in your life. Huggs TLee

John Rhinem

Date: 4/27/2012 3:16:00 PM

Smile ~ What If I Said That You Were Beautiful * Would That Tear Us Apart? ~ My Love, Always, John!:) ~

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/27/2012 5:25:00 PM

John I'll take that as a rhetorical question and chuckle to myself at your taunting banter. ~:) and thanks for the smile. I hope the moonlight of your dreams brings a smile of contentment to your being. Huggs TLee

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 4/27/2012 3:15:00 PM

Very well written dear.I enjoyed this much.

Terry L. Allen
Date: 4/27/2012 5:31:00 PM

Hi Elliott how ya doin hon. I am so glad you enjoyed this. The I think and guessing game is for the birds. Just ask or tell it like it is. Saves a lot of headaches. May one of lifes smiles find your face and forget to leave. Huggs TLee