Communal Holiday

Communal Holiday.
The holiday home for children 
was near a cold lake
flanked by two black mountains 
We children swam there
every morning at seven
before the sun warmed the lake.
Breakfast at eight, mainly oatmeal porridge
and stale bread.
Boot camp for children. 
Three weeks of this then we were let loose 
to roam a town of summer dust 
and trees in the park we could climb up
to get away from adults
who had forgotten their own childhood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 21, 2014 at 11:18 PM
Nice write, Jan. Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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May 21, 2014 at 5:52 PM
Hi Jan, this is deep, and sad... Linda
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May 22, 2014 at 2:12 AM
thank you Poet Destroyer
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