Commons

(To a wonderful Aussie officer who worked with us, who we all sorely miss -he's back in Australia)


A spirited Aussie in a fast thing,
slicing through air in a wild land in which renewed comfort is found.
Gone are the days in the land much foreign to his own,
toiling for months to remedy intricacies reigning a thousand years.
A smirk, a hat, blinding wit, and a captivation defines him,
to the ones who sadly he left behind…



Written in Afghanistan -25 AUG 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 18, 2016 at 6:30 PM
A little bit sad but definitely a sweet sentiment for someone you admire. He's back home and hopefully you arrived back in Texas too. :)
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December 24, 2013 at 4:44 AM
Hi Marquis, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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December 21, 2013 at 2:56 PM
At first I had thought you were going to say he passed on. I'm glad that was not the case. A very thoughtful tribute. Merry Christmas my friend.
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December 21, 2013 at 11:59 PM
Rich, good to hear from you again...thanks for paying me a visit. No, no, he's doing well in Australia. I knew that last part was important...didn't want to lead anyone to think the worst :^) Merry Christmas to you my friend and have a wonderful New Year! MC
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December 6, 2013 at 12:58 AM
Great poem, and I salute you being there, I hope you read some of the veterans day poems wrote!!!
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December 21, 2013 at 11:55 PM
Thank you Arthur, I appreciate you stopping by, reading, and commenting. I will have to take a look at your inventory once I get back in a little more than a month -thanks! MC
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