Common Ground - For Contest

Common Ground


They would emerge
sandy grisly looking beings
mysteriously become a presence,
a part of a momentary event
Following the scent of happiness,
creeping past the invisible sentries,
blending into the fabric of time’s
need for companionship.
They carried the rudiments of fun,
a smile, a stick, two seashells,
a bucket, a bent shovel.
The borders shrank
then grew to include all,
the moat around the castle spread,
new towers were erected,
soft stones were placed as tribute
to “seaweed” demons.
As the sun faded the surf approached,
slowly, innocently, inevitably.
The grisly beings withdrew,
wraithlike in their disappearance,
returning to their roots,
withdrawing into time’s shadows.
I would remain with my son
to watch the surf erase the evidence
of the mystical castles
built by un-named, bright faced
children drawn to the scent of happiness,
building togethercastles in the sand.


11/15/2016 

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November 26, 2016 at 3:05 AM
Following the scent of happiness, creeping past the invisible sentries, blending into the fabric of time’s need for companionship. //...grisly beings and togethercastles.... i llove it. Good luck.
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November 26, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Just another day at the beach Darren
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November 18, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Interesting work..It grasp and led the reader to a surprise ending..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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November 20, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Sara.
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November 15, 2016 at 8:27 PM
This is fantastic!
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November 20, 2016 at 10:29 PM
thanks Christy for stopping to read and comment.
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