Common Bugs

We Write of Bugs!

As poets, we can write of many things -
romance and true love, just to name a few.
We even write about the pretty wings
of butterflies and seas of cobalt blue.

We see a mantis, and symbolically,
we use it to inspire us, or we might
be outside in summer and chance to see
a bug that lights the night, and so we write!

We’ll write about that lightening bug because
it’s what we do! Be it ladybug cute
or pesky like a fly with  minor flaws,
we’ll write of it, and that is absolute!

We can be serious, but also fun!
We write because ourselves we love to please,
and once we start, we write until we're done,
for we are as industrious as bees!

May 8,2018 for  Kim Rodrigues' WHAT DO WE HAVE IN COMMON Contest

Topic words in common: butterflies, mantis, 
lightening bug, ladybug, pesky (bugs) & bees
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Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:38 PM
A lovely poem, Andrea. Congrats on your win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 2:11 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win.
Haight Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 4:50 PM
Love how you met the theme, Andrea. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Congratulation on this wonderful well written write ... Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentry Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 2:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this fun poem about what we have in common! Enjoyed.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 9:01 AM
So cute! Congrats, Andrea! Hugs...Kim
Murray Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 4:55 PM
How lovely. As I was reading through the comments a little ladybird landed on my computer screen. She must also like your poem Andrea.
Thirtyseven Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:35 AM
I wish my pen was busy as a bee.
Barden Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 11:35 PM
Nicely done, my friend, I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme ... and I love bugs! I have a couple of lightning bug poems, (one I'm very fond of), and butterflies ... doesn't sound like me, does it, lol?? Wonderful write - I expect to see this at the top!! :-) <3
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Enjoyed reading, Andrea, Kim will like this. Good luck in the contest.. Thank you for reading my write on the Roosevelt Elk they are just beautiful and fascinating to watch. Hugs Eve
Sathasivam Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 6:25 AM
Excellent and truthful write my dear friend. . Enjoyed reading it. Best of luck.
Anish Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Clever words here! I would like to read a poem about lightning bugs! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Horsman Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Oh love this Andrea, and the last line superb. and the poetry, pure honey, (sweet -as)
Warrior Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:18 PM
You bugger you lol...great read Andrea...best of luck...love, and light...^WW^
Cunningham Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 11:05 AM
How true that is Andrea , we can write about practically anything and make it shine. Good luck. Tom.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 11:05 AM
I enjoyed this so much Andrea! Couple bug poems of my own ;) Good luck in the contest!! xomo!
Michael Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Relevant as the sunshine...or the darkness of the night...there's always something to say...Common traits of poetry...All the best Andrea...
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 9:40 AM
You and Kim..both of you are industrious no doubt! Keep writing on..bugs or not. Enjoyed reading your creation..hope Kim will too!
Walker Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 9:24 AM
Love this, you are inspired by everything and even the smallest of things inspire you.
Faulkner Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 9:10 AM
So true - we can be inspired by such simple things - love how upbeat this is, good luck in the contest!
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 8:53 AM
What a fun poem, I hope you both keep on being as industrious as 'busy bees',:-) hugs jan xx
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