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Commitmentphobe

The peace I wanted, it had felt so right, My deepest desire, still aching for more. My head on your lap reading till midnight, A moment with you found what I searched for. In the darkest night my dreams are with you. A million miles away still you haunt me, The ghost of your touch that felt so true. Once more you abandon what we could be. I thought we had found something truly real, In this world filled with lies and hypocrites. Third times the charm, again I'll let it heal. The truth hides behind all of your secrets. Instead of success you forced it to fail I always knew you'd be the first to bail.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2016 12:29:00 AM
NICE TO READ THIS POEM AGAIN SYNDELL
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Date: 4/24/2016 9:57:00 AM
Syndell Collins, nice to see this one again. linda
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Date: 8/11/2015 4:35:00 AM
- A great poem ! - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Syndell :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2015 12:42:00 AM
Hi Syndell Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/8/2015 12:18:00 AM
Such an unfortunate event for you, yet a well-expressed poem. Good job -JT
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Date: 8/7/2015 11:40:00 PM
Syndell, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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