Jay Narain Poet Triolet

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A non-contest poem.

Commitment

A bond we pledge, both firm and true,
Through the trials vast and fleeting days,
To walk the path as chosen few,
A bond we pledge, both firm and true.
Through storm and calm, we still renew,
Our steadfast vows, life's tangled maze,
A bond we pledge, both firm and true,
Through the trials vast and fleeting days.

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Valsa George July 30, 2025 at 9:10 PM The pledge to walk the path together through life's tangled maze should be held firm and true. That's our commitment. Great Triolet.

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2025 at 1:00 PM very nice. Is it for the contrasting triolet contest?

Sotto Poet January 15, 2025 at 6:20 AM Jay, your writing is just so beautiful. The value of preserving one's pledge is often overlooked.

Darlene De Beaulieu January 14, 2025 at 11:47 AM Hello Jay, You said it very well. Enjoy your day my frind. /Darlene/

Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2025 at 1:04 PM - Nice written, Jay :) - hugs