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A non-contest poem.

A bond we pledge, both firm and true, Through the trials vast and fleeting days, To walk the path as chosen few, A bond we pledge, both firm and true. Through storm and calm, we still renew, Our steadfast vows, life's tangled maze, A bond we pledge, both firm and true, Through the trials vast and fleeting days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 1/16/2025 1:00:00 PM
very nice. Is it for the contrasting triolet contest?
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Date: 1/15/2025 6:20:00 AM
Jay, your writing is just so beautiful. The value of preserving one's pledge is often overlooked.
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Date: 1/14/2025 11:47:00 AM
Hello Jay, You said it very well. Enjoy your day my frind. /Darlene/
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Date: 1/12/2025 1:04:00 PM
- Nice written, Jay :) - hugs
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